Helping Hand (my first attempt at a full-length 'rap-rhythm' song? lol)07:28 Apr 08 2009
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You're flying so high, you've got a nosebleed
Too bad its illegally induced, by your weed
I never needed any of that druggie shit, man
I'm Straightedged, clean, and I'll still soar higher than you can.
I been alive for 21 years now, count em off one by one, I've been sober for em all
You've been alive for just as many, but damn, doesn't your addicted life feel so small?
Let me help, just feel my feelings, step right into MY shoes
And then maybe you can think, cross examine, and realize why you do more stupid shit than I do
I was raised with intuition enough to respect myself
Not thrust myself downward into my own personal hell
But wait, don't give up, you can be saved, I know it
Just decide to think for yourself, gather that shit up and throw it...
Out the window man, the window of your whole entire life
You've got so many reasons to live, think of your family, your children and your wife
I realize this all may not be any of my business
But I'm here for you, whether or not you appreciate it
Now or later, sooner'd be better than later
I know its harsh, but damnit, I'm doing you a favor
So sit down beside me, sit down and really think hard about your life
Is this struggling, this addiction, this pain, all this bad stuff what you wanna feel inside?
I know you hear me, I know you understand
Try to help yourself, and I'll be your helping hand
COMMENTS
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Kryptick
07:34 Apr 08 2009
*exchanges my fedora for a gangsta hat and turns it somewhat sideways, making gangster-ish symbols with my hands*
...k, now that i'm done being disturbing...
i like it!
Firedrake
10:09 Apr 08 2009
This is awesome, you really gotta get your songs published (and then send me the cd)
MyArmyMyMilitaryMyLife
07:39 Jun 15 2009
I don't know... It's hard for me to get into stuff like this without hearing it...
I hate that about me... I'm more of an audio type person...
Other than that, looks good to me!
Two thumbs up! ^_^
evilsandwich
09:42 Jun 20 2009
awesome if u become famous and publish that song send me a autographed cd of that =p